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Nerameshu

Naruto Alternate RP

Only Nerameshu and Sgt. Nightmare are allowed to post in this roleplay. This is to teach Sgt. Nightmare how to RP and to let Nerameshu break away and relieve stress from NO ONE POSTING IN HIS FIGHT OR FOLLOWING THE TIMELINE THAT USER SET FORTH!!!

Ahem... Anyways... Sgt. Nightmare, please post your character. If you want me to post Nerameshu, the only character I will use here, tell me and I will. Otherwise, I'll wait for you to start the roleplay. Keep in mind, Nerameshu is part of the Sand Village.
Sgt.Nightmare

...ok first of all...my character is from the shadow village. he knows many dark-night-time jutsues. he owns only one weapon...night sword. he has ok taijutsues, ok ninjutsues, and superb genjutsues. ...anything else i need to tell you?...or shal we get started?...
Nerameshu

Nope, that's good enough for this. Note that [ and ] denote OOC chatter, everything you want to say but isn't a part of the RolePlay.

Ok. Start us off. Just remember to use storybook style writing.
Sgt.Nightmare

ok...
Sgt.Nightmare

One day a Nightmare clone walks up to Neras house...unsheithes his massive sword and knockes on his door. "Nerameshu. I challenge you to a fight! You will find me at the enterance to the Village hidden in the Dark! Come if you feel ready to DIE!" Then he destroys half of Nera's with one mighty strike...
Nerameshu

"Hey, Kino."

"Yeah?"

"Someone probably should've told that guy Nerameshu isn't home right now."

"Oh. That might be some trouble. Masajiraro?"

A large silver wolf responded. "Yes?" His accent was faintly British.

"Go tell Nerameshu that some guy wants to fight him at the Village Hidden in the Dark."

"Yes sir, Kino. Mitsurugi, you wanna tell him something?"

"Hmm? Sure. Tell him to pick up some sandwhich meat."

"That's good, I forgot. See you two later." Sand swirled around the wolf as he dissappeared, searching for Nerameshu.

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"... 128 Palms!" The tree splintered a bit more, nearly broken through. "256 Palms!" As the 129th strike hit the tree, it finally shattered, giving way under Nerameshu. "Why does that always happen?" He looks around, saddened at how many tree he's already destroyed. "That's bad... I hope the Kazekage doesn't mind..."

Sand swirled up behind Nerameshu, forming a small spiral. Masajiraro, Nerameshu's summoned wolf, stood on all fours behind him. "Some strange man wants to fight you. He said to meet you outside the Hidden Darkness Village."

"Thank you." Blood rushed out of Nerameshu's left arm and swallowed him, and he was gone.

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"Who is here?" Blood rushed up from the ground as Nerameshu formed in front of the gates to the Village.
Sgt.Nightmare

"Nerameshu...you might not know me but i know you all too well! do you remember the village you destroyed about 3 months ago?...THAT WAS MY VILLAGE!!! and now i shall get my revenge NOW!!! I Sgt.Nightmare shall DEFEAT YOU!! my black chacara starts swirling around me. "Twin Night Clone Jutste!"...Two black figures appear around you and start to attack you.
Nerameshu

[Make everything third-person orientation. No I's, you's, or me's in reference to players. The characters may say that, but the player may not. The reason behind this would be so that when you go into the main RP, you will be controlling three team members and their every move.

Aside from that, not so bad. ]

The Sharingan flashes in Nerameshu's right eye as he draws two kunai out of the holsters under his cloak. He stabs the two clones with great ease, then grabs an extra kunai in each hand. Blood rushes down his left arm as he brings his arms up to form an X in front of him. When his blood hit the elbow, it fell like a stream to the ground, where it immediately formed into a clone. "Blood Style: Blood Clone Jutsu."

The clone's right hand started the very familiar Chidori, but something strange was happening to it... A Rasengan was forming around it!

The clone's mouth seemed to twist when he spoke the words "Storm Style: Storm Surge," but the last word was lost as a crack of thunder resonated in the air. Just as soon as the crack sounded, the clone disappeared, while the real Nerameshu rushed towards Sgt.Nightmare. He jumped into the air and stretched out his arms.

"Dragon's Fangs." The kunai came down into Sgt.Nightmare's shoulders, two kunai in each shoulder, piercing the muscle.
Sgt.Nightmare

Laughing Nightmare pops up behind you. Screaming out he says,"Dark Consumption Jutsue!"...the darkness around nera's kuni consumes them in an instant...my two clones attach to each other and explode creating a massive exploson! in the smoke Nera hears," Dark Forbidden Jutsue: Dark Power Unleash!" a dark figure comes out and hits nera with a mighty attack.
Nerameshu

[Listen dude! Third person! That means you can't use I, me, or you in your writing!]

"That might've been ok... except that you obviously can't face off against the Sharingan. I haven't even used my other eye yet." The space where Nerameshu had occupied was now filled... with a massive log!

The Nerameshu that had disappeared using Storm Surge now returned to the battlefield. He rushed forward with almost astounding speed, right hand trailing behind him. The clone stopped, moving like he was about to lunge his right palm forward when he disappeared again.

"Hello." Behind Nightmare, Nerameshu's voice spoke to him. A small sphere of force hit Nightmare in the lower back, near the spine, and lifted him. The sphere's control dissapated, letting Nightmare twirl in the air for a second as the Chidori bit into the skin, ripping bone and muscle. "Your turn."
Sejimaru

[Maybe you should be teaching me how to rp too, ur good.]
Nerameshu

[Thanks, lol. You're good, you just need to work on your grammar a little. Besides, this will have nothing to do with the main roleplay. The only reason I used Nerameshu was so I wouldn't get attached to a new character.]
Sgt.Nightmare

Out of the smoke of the just reacent explosion, sgt.nightmare reappears holding the handsign of the tiger. A stream of darkness flows out of his arms. With blinding speed he dissapears. the dark clone explodes and destroys neras clone.
"now its your turn"
Nerameshu

"Ok. Byakugan!" Nerameshu's left eye changed, having an outline of a strained pupil and veins appearing to the left side of the eye. Every bit of chakra that could fly about the battle ground was instantly visible. Looking for a pattern the size and shape of Nightmare, Nerameshu quickly closed in, and drawing two kunai, one in each hand.

Once he reached Nightmare, not a problem for his flash-step, he cross folded his arms, scratching a cross shape into Nightmare's back. "Logic now dictates it's your move."

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