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Kayko Sagouro

Nameless

Okay, so this poem came about when I was in English and I had to write a poem for a test. I couldn't think of anything, so I decided to copy one I'd already written (mainly because my muses were being mean to me and didn't want to help T.T). Problem: I couldn't remember anything I had already written. So! I started to think of On A Bird's Wings, but I couldn't think of all of it, so this started instead. And I still think it ends rather suddenly because it's in sonnet form, but I've been told differently, so...I don't really know. Also, if any of you can think of a good title for it, I would be happy to hear it!

Sometimes I wish I could fly away,
Just leave behind this eternal brawl,
I wish I could spread my wings and forget this day,
In a world where all we can do is crawl.

Sometimes I feel just like a ghost,
A hollow shell drifting aimlessly by,
My love forever seeking a host,
My tongue cut out to prevent a forlorn cry.

But then one day, the clouds will part,
And the moon will release her silvery glow,
Stealing my breath and eternal heart,
While atop her head lies a golden halo.

And now I can know that forever my love
Will fly on the wings of a snow white dove.
Nerameshu

Keeping up the true artistic form! Way to go!

Sadly, though, I'm not so good with titles, or else I'd help you out. Why do you think I use the same character for every RP I do? lolz
Kayko Sagouro

heheh, don't worry about it, i suck with them too (obviously...).

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