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 Post Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 5:35 am    Post subject: My 2 minute poem
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If this sucks soory cause i made this in like 2 minutes lol:


When the light of love hits a target.
When darkness finds its prey.
When all the people go back home.
I will never run away.

When people smash you with their words
when people make false claims
When you feel All alone
I will always stay the same.

So even when ur feeling blue
or just feel left behind,
when you seem to be left without a clue.
I am always here for you.
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 Post Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 2:30 am    Post subject:
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Not bad. Now make a sonnet! lol
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 Post Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 8:55 pm    Post subject:
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that's awesome for being done in two minutes! i always take like, half an hour, at least!
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 Post Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 10:53 pm    Post subject:
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I wish I was poetic. I have enough trouble making my thoughts coherent without having to give them a rhyming scheme.
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 Post Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 11:17 pm    Post subject:
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Me too, man. You're not alone.
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 Post Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 12:23 am    Post subject:
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XD
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 Post Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 9:11 pm    Post subject:
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you think you have trouble keeping your thoughts coherent? one of my friends told me today that i must have confuse rays shooting out of my eyes when i talk to her, because i always seem to confuse her or myself!

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that's not good, is it?

...
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 Post Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 10:05 pm    Post subject:
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No, but it can be very amusing. Sometimes, I use really big words that could choke a cat just so I can see people's faces as the gears of their mind come screeching to a halt. People who are utterly dumbfounded look funny. It is not, however, a good way to make and keep friends.
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 Post Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 5:32 am    Post subject:
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No junk XD, see i like messin with people to....i won't say how cause its my gift ^^.
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 Post Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 8:34 am    Post subject:
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Everybody has their way of messing with people. Locke and I like to point out Mass' spelling and grammatical mistakes, Plato tortures us with 'philosophy' and thoughts on everything, and Mass... Well, you've read his posts...

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 Post Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 8:43 am    Post subject:
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Yup you've read mine.......HEEEEEY....Thats soo not cool. TT_TT

I happen to be able to twist most sentences to my favor and i have a great knowledge of how to use words thank you! >,<
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 Post Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 7:12 pm    Post subject:
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You shouldn't have to twist the sentences. If the hard data doesn't support you, then don't make it sound like it does.
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 Post Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 8:31 pm    Post subject:
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what the heck does that mean?
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 Post Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 11:14 pm    Post subject:
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That means if you're a loser, you'll always be a loser. It's destiny.

Any one with Neji Hyuga as their avatar should know that.
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 Post Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 11:22 am    Post subject:
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Well after Neji got his butt kicked by Naruto he had a little change of mind.
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 Post Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 8:00 pm    Post subject:
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....You guys are all losers for even knowing who those people are....CRAP! i know who those people are!! **sigh** ah well, i guess i must accept it.....besides, i'm already a nerd, how bad could utter loser-dome be?


...right?
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 Post Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 10:22 pm    Post subject:
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Compared to the rest of the weird, we're all losers. Look at us, we watch Japanese cartoons! We play games with WORDS!
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HECKS YEA, WORDS AND ANIME ROCKZORZ!......omg...tell me i didn't just say rockzorz...
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 Post Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 8:19 am    Post subject:
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... You did...

... You nerd...

... ... ... I'm running out of periods...
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Well don't forget my old username, Nerdomatic92 XD.



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